Shy freshman Gina Wesley wants desperately to get into the greatest club her college has ever known. Standing in her way is the gorgeous Max Devlin.
But Max has an interesting ‘initiation’ method . . . involving metal clamps, a hard shaft, some mysterious nozzles, and the most creative double penetration Gina will ever scream to. That is . . . until she progresses to Level Two.
WARNING: Not to be read at work!
This was top 2 in Amazon’s Erotica category? That’s what’s wrong with this country.
To sum this all up in one word: No.
I know BDSM, I know humiliation play, and I know very well all the devices that can incite pain and pleasure.
I made countless stupid mistakes in my youth, so I get Gina’s desperate attempt to get into an elite club at college, and I understand her willingness to have kinky sex for entry into that club.
The asshole who takes advantage of girls in desperation? He might be the only reasonable factor in the story.
A BDSM-virgin saying that 6 metal clamps on her labia does not induce pain, and only intense pleasure? No.
Same BDSM-virgin being double penetrated while 8 metal clamps and chains on her most sensitive parts (vagina and nipples) are being pulled during vigorous sex which continues for an extensive period of time and still saying that all of the above combination does not cause any pain? No.
She’s even an ass-virgin, but ok, some girls can take it rough even for her first time. Plausible.
But, the same girl also willing to be humiliated? Real humiliation: have a strange man pee on her while her vagina is stretched wide open? Very far-fetched mindset.
Hate to be the Grammar Nazi, but one either “removes” clothes or “takes off” clothes, one does not “remove off” clothes.
The writing is smooth in general, that is the only redeeming factor.
2 out of 5 stars in my book.